| the real man of steel | IP: 
 
 I See This Dude Is From "Rockville" So You Know He Bout To Get "Stoned"He Swore He Was "Hard" Till He Went To Prison And He "Caught A Bone"
 ^^^Weak opener
 You'll Starve For Wins While The Rest Of RV Feeds Off Of Your Losses
 I'll Be Takin The "W'"z So That "I" Can See This "N"igga Was Costless
 ^^^no
 Oops I Just Made His Mouth Drop Like When I Pulled out My Dick
 They Say Im The "Magacian" The Way I Just "Call Out These Tricks"
 ^^^Ight....
 Wow Dude Where's Your Life Your 20 Yrs Old and Your On RV?
 Damn I Always Knew That This "Ava" Character Couldnt Be "Archy"
 ^^^okay
 Stay "Focus" Mayne Or Else You Might Be Lookin "Ford" To Defeat
 You Trying To "Buy Some Pussy" When You Cant "Afford The Feet"
 ^^^Played closer
 
 Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool
 N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules
 ^^^Lmao...good opener
 I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin
 That I use AIM all the time...
 ... when I want an easy win
 ^^^Uhhh...ight
 So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude
 Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you
 ^^^Nice
 Ya writing is garbage n' quoted wordplay is madness
 But I see your the topical leader...
 ... when it comes to wackness
 ^^^Nice...i like this
 Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches
 I filled a verse with personals...
 ... like what ya need to find ANY bitches
 ^^^Good closer
 V./Datrushurtz.....this was an ight battle...aimez came played ...ur punchs were weak no hate but u didnt come strong...datrus u had a good solid verse wit good personals an good punchs that werent played it was consistent....good battle
 
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