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Old 12-23-05, 02:37 PM   #6
DaTrusHurtz
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I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
okay, so what?
Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
cool concept but poorly worded
Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
connect concepts are played
This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
decent punch here actually
Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
weak statement for a closer, needed to finish stronger

vs.

Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
okay concept but poorly worded
Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
haha. pretty funny man, made me laugh
Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
nah, this was corny and weak
Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
sounds ilke it came from a joke site, kinda weak
I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
I used a popeyes line awhile ago and much better than this

Hmm, close battle, tough to pick a winner here. Two very different styles. GKillaz worded his shit better, but came more simple and played. Invektive came a bit more creative, but most of his shit was weak except for the round two line. I don't know if others will like that round two line, it was kinda corny like a lot of your shit, but for some reason I found it pretty funny, lol. As a whole, I'd also say Invektive came less statementish and got this with consistency.

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