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Old 12-23-05, 04:56 PM   #11
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How ima battle somebody tryna rhyme like Em?
even if he rapped his age he still wouldnt be a "10"
..first line doesn't make much sense.If you referring to his sig with the rhyming like em thing,that's not actually him rhyming like em.It's him leavin feed in someone's song where THEY rhymed like em.And in the 2nd line,he's not 10.And how can you rap your age?Makes no sense.
Runnin bases on dude like canseco after juice hits
Publicly fuckin up this dude like gays in massachusetts
...Good.

Glock work? lemme show you how tha clock work
When tha hand meets needle deadly like herion addicts
...NO
Dudes a closet case suttin like mansons attic
...Gon finish that bar?

J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"
...OK,
engulf the wordplay wit a "hex,"
dont this nigga kno i got da game by its "neck//
...WHy do you keep qouting your rhyming "words".
im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//
...Decent
im here 2 murda this cat not make sumtin 4 "kids,"
ima stick 10 knives in his "ribs",jus 4 gettin in my "biz"//
...NOpe,
im "serious",my head "delirious",jackin off 2 barely 18--- videos wit a hacksaw compared 2 me r.kelly's "hilarious//
...No rhyme?,Wtf?
ill punch j n hit "carter",then "clothes-line" carter n ----
punchline "j",cats like yo wtf he jus "say",u can "say" wut u want about "me",but im spell-checkin ya words like a spellin "b",man fuck this battle im up in smoke---
like dr. d-r-e!
...FUck it..

Ok,I didn't like this battle to be honest.
J.Carter...your lines didn't make much sense.Like the tryna rhyme like em one..and the age/10 shit..

Allik war..fix ya structure up.And why do you keep doing "this" with your shit.IT's annoying.And a bunch of your shit didn't rhyme...

I'ma have to give it to Allik war..

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