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Old 12-23-05, 10:07 PM   #13
Magic5
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Voted For: Blackmage

Blackmage

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
Not a punch..
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
Nah.. Way to forced..
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
Not a punch.. just a statement..
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
Concept had potential, but it was worded wrong..
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
Not a punch..
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
This kind of nameplay is played against Flow Intelligent..

Flow Intelligent

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
Pretty good..
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
Concept is pretty played..
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
This is really played..
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
Decent..
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
Nah.. I get it, but it just seems a little far out..
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
Simple.. but decent..

Conclusion

This battle wasn't that close. Blackmage had a lot of statements, and in his whole verse there wasn't a quotable. His lines seemed to be either played or not punches at all. Flow Intelligent had a few played lines, but a few decent ones as well. Almost all of his lines were punches, which alone takes my vote. But, on top of that, some of his punches were actually pretty good. Flow Intelligent had the better overall verse.

Vote - Flow Intelligent

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217622
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