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Old 12-23-05, 10:25 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
Even though this is the beginning so many people will use the concept of mentioning the predicitins as a punch. Not fresh.

Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
Was ok

Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
This concept has been done better & too many times before

This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
A lil simple

Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
Hm.. not bad

Your wording just seemed off & some stuff wasn't too original.

NEXT!


Quote:
Originally Posted by Invektive
Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
OK

Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
good

Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
Nah

Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
Played concept

I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
OK


Overall I'm going to have to go with Inv.. in this battle. Inv.. next time come with witty stuff on level with the 'round 2' line throughtout your verse & you should kill it.
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