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Old 12-24-05, 01:44 AM   #19
.Ike.
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col...

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
ok...

im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
ok...

u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
ehh

u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
ok...

its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
decent...

pretty consistent verse there.....

ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
cold/flu symptom/medicine/sick....all that...= played punch

ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
no...

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
ok..

remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
pretty decent wordplay here...but fire/devil/hell punches...= played

jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
decent closer...


V/ Col

why? cause his verse just had better punches and was WAY more consistent
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