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Old 12-24-05, 08:52 PM   #5
Paranoid
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Past Tense, nice verse man, good flow and delivery lyrics were also pretty good, overall I thought you did a good job man. Ysdat you were better on this one except your vocals volume needs to be upped but I could understand you and the quality was better, lyrics were good but flow was a bit off but mainly you need to turn the vocals up.

pretty good track

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