beat cud be louder...or lower ur vocals just a tad...maybe 1.5-2 decibels


the Biggie add-on was off beat, so it took away from it. But, as always, his lyrics are dope.


I liked your rhyming here and there. Your flow was good, but your delivery of them was monotone throughout.

This wasn't a good "song". But, if you were messing around, it was decent for what it was. Your verse as a whole was pretty decent.


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