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New to RV
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IP:
Listenin...
Beat sounds sick..whoa situation is fucked up....beat definately ill...
Flow isn't wonderful, but its just choppy make yaself smooth and flowy (sorry for bad descriptive words) and it'll help it out...
ya voice sounds fine...i mean nothing to complain about.. 
chorus comes in..a lil angry, a lil remorseful which is a great emotional hold....but the words / rhymes are basic..simplicity sometimes gets through a point, this just seems a sign of lack of experience maybe?...perhaps i'm wrong...
the story is ill...i mean realness is the best way to go...and its all about convincin me you went through this..which you did...which is a good thing.. emotion = great... ...
Overall -
great beat....mediocre flow with mediocre lyrics...hmmm...just an average track with great emotion...somethin to work on? = flow
stay up and grindin tho my fam
-Truth-
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