I thought this was dope.

As sad as it sounds
the youth is fading
deamons releasing rounds
while siblings were playing.


^^ This part put a dope image in my head, of someone like a demon firing shots upon small children. It fitted the topic perfectly.

Also i like the way you added the colors. It seperated each feeling, which i felt you did very nicely.

I also i like your rhyme scheme, mostly being ABAB. This added a nice flow to the poem which again, made it a good read.

Nice Job.

Keep It up.