Yet again, Pure dopeness. You never fail to impress.


First of all, I feel this could be made an even better read if you shortened it just a little.


You allways come up with most amazing titles, If a noob posted a poem called Concrete Bottles, I would think that what he was litterally talking about. But I know you always have a deeper meaning, and again you did that very nicely.

the final line finished off the poem pefectly by summing it up.

Dopeness overall.

Keep Writing