Banned: Biting
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IP:
A Descent peice man.
The opening stanza wasnt too good though, the rhyming scheme seemed forced.
But it gradually got better. And ended as a descent poem.
Getting accustomed to the calloused knees
Losing the will to leave everyone pleased
^^ that was dope man, very deep.
Overall not a bad peice atall.
Keep writing
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