Voted For: NotoriousM
Flow – Notorious M, the structure was the same for both competitors but Notorious M flowed much better
Punches – Notorious M, nobody really had a punch lines, but I felt that Notorious M’s third and fourth line was nice because it flowed perfectly
Personals – tied, No hate but both had extremely poor personals…probably because this was a short battle. I suggest that both have more personals albeit they are tough to have when you battle over the net
Multies – Notorious M, on the sheer fact that he had A multie whereas Gangsta Kim really didn’t. Again, the multie was your third and fourth line which was the only bar I really liked in this battle
Vocab – I am not a believer in vocabulary but cogency and clarity are vital. Note for Notorious M: the word admittable doesn’t exist. So for making a minor mistake like this, I have to give this to Gangsta Kim
Originality – no real originality in both verses
Winner: Notorious M
Keep working hard AND good luck. No hate.
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