Voted For: Blackmage
Blackmage
I'll stop when i won the round
I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now?-good idea but your delivery could have been better
you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell
Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L-damn!!!!!
100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it
after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit
sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never
(copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort
Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad
but one's the lonliest number.....
....so even your one good bar is sad-OK
Here you go pimp hurry up with that mic so we can collab
Nick Fletcher
IP:
Your fucking wack with your forced wordplay and played punches.
Check it,
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this..
..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black,
like a stone cold fucking racist!!-nice personal and flow
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Ha, just kiddin!!
Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through,
And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W-nice bar
I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker
But you say endorsements kick ass………
…so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!-no personal but original
I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it,
Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!!
It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick,
I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!!-you fell off at the end
Flow – Nick Fletcher’s structure was better – he had a smoother flow
Punches – Nick Fletcher, although most of the lines weren’t punches I was feeling Nick’s BMW line and Nike sneaker line a lot
Personals - Blackmage, did not had less than Nick Fletcher’s. But I believe in quality over quantity: the pun you created from NFL was very very witty. I think that was a very nice personal and therefore, it was a strong punchline as well.
Assonances- Both did not have multies except Blackmage’s first bar. However, it was delivered poorly. I suggest increasing the amount of multies in your rhymes if they are not redundant as they will enhance the flow of your verse.
Originality – Blackmage, with his personal (pun made out from the word NFL and his how number one is a lonely number and how he followed up on that)
Overall a decent battle. Winner: Blackmage because his personals were good enough to be hard punches and originality is the hardest thing to come up with. No hate though…Sorry Nick, in all honestly, it was a tough call
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