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Old 12-27-05, 01:08 AM   #11
Sean Gunner
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Trey Methodz
Ur never burnin.....ur raps weak....him wit hot flow yea right
Cuz the only time Wic's on fire.....is right before i toss the dynamite
I was expecting a candle line, this concept is played, but the punch could have connected with some better wording.
yah shits played an recycled....him comin original dont be hopeful
spit so much trash.....the city misstaken ur mouth for a garbage disposal
Nah. Not feeling this. Possible fake personal in set up with recycling cuz of no proof.
Ur skills are goin up an down the Poll...his career aint makin Far
Cuz i Stay throwin more One's..To the floor....than drunks at strip bars
Haha, this was ok but self glorification more than a punch.
Saw him in mcdonalds...he wanted a battle...he said lets go ten
I told him to Drop his best flip an he proceeded to jump in the play pen
Haha, fake personal but still funny. Punch was ok.
His torney life jus got short changed...dont worry it happen to many
Anyway Yah Raps wouldnt even make sense........if u robbed J.C. Penny
Nice wordplay and having the set up actually have something to do with the punch. Don't see that much.

Overall, I wasn't too impressed. You had 2 punches I felt that hit somewhat. Work on punches and not self glorification.

Wicked One
Aight first i heard this dude, mentions U2 when he spits, thats a shame...
I'll send ya to heaven where the streets have no name...
No punch.
In my opinon u should really quick text...
Cuz only time u "cum" hard is when u, cyber-sex...
Man, in KORV 3? Please.
I'll puncture each rib so it ruptures, slicing the neck of played cluckers...
Trey's a loser & bluffer, whose self esteem lead him to a career as a minimum wage fluffer...
Fake personal and filler.
I force feed e's into your bloodstream to make you OD...
You wouldnt have an alphabetic advantage rapping with Eazy E...
Ok....Bad punch.
I Stuff you headfirst back in ya mammas twat so you can be born again...
This the nigga that faked his death now ya'll gon really be MOURNING him...
Meh.

You didn't really have any punches. Just I'll do this, I'll do that, and self glorification. Work on making real punches and not worrying about structure.

v- Trey methodz
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