Blackmage
I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes
Eh..punch was ok.
lazy fool this battles a sex crime, i'll make sure it gets taped
If i rob killa's i'll end up like you, behind bars gettin raped
Play of his name was bad.
and callin you wack is played, it's been preached from every serminal
you don't even have a rep, how the hell i'm a use a personal
This was the best punch. Was ok bordering good.
leavin you terminal, give me a metaphor....somethin
not on your level though, the only that can compare to you...is nothin
Eh, bad wording.
I'm like spul sig, i may be a scrabble freak
I won't KORv, but R'sKO and me leave with the V
No.

You had two real punches, one ok, one blah. Just work on better concpts.

RobKilla
Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you
Played wordplay, and you don't do audio, so ya.
my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches
Played.
This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black
Eh, wordplay was somewhat witty. But no real punch.
riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses
No creativity.
i red your previous battles, your dirty laundry has been raided
i can tell you didnt bring your all, cuz on this mic youve been faded
Nah. Bad personal and bad wording.

Really need to work on wording and more original concepts. Wordplay was ok in one spot, but you didn't make a punch.

v- Black

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