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Go reply to two piece man, I wont close it cuz I just asked you to post but ya... Just gotta keep this all circulating.
Hm, this was a very interesting piece. Very short which at first glance I was expecting to like because that short of an amount of lines is difficult to develop story in. But you did an excellent job in pronouncing your views and plot. I really liked the use of the word 'Disease' in the title because at first the piece does seem to be relatable to a pack of, almost lepors just invading... But later on, to me anyways, it seemed to be that this was a piece going after and attacks the means of politcal oppressions. Rather than just the surface value, 'Disease'. I could be wrong though. Very nice piece overall man. Thanks again for posting and please just go follow through and reply to two other piece and post the links.
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