tooth tiger
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IP:
Voted For: Daubs
Look Yo I'll take Yo Life and put it on display like a Prized Trophie
Daubs is a "Crackhead Gangsta" That's why they call him a "Dope G"
^rofl, life as a trophy? that's a good thing, 1/10
Daub plays to much backline and left His entire crew Defenseless
Now im takin out yo "Frontline" and left Yo "Top" Niggaz "Toothless"
^this was a sad, sad attempt, and you're not black 1/10
Takin a Dick Withouth The Vasoline was The only Time You Was Tight
He Likes The Left Hand and fingers Thats Why He Just Cant Get Right
^first line doesn't make sense, and it was aight attempt at a punch 3/10
Stop Daubney before she solves my case...Ha man i'll Smack Scooby doo
Shoot Freddy, Kill Velma and put three holes in shaggy's head Too.
^this was fucking just stupid 0/10
Try droppin a verse dauby even with "El El" He still aint "Twice The Man"
Your Like The IRS Bill collector No one wants to hear what You're Sayin
^nope, and it doesn't even rhyme that well, 1/10
overall: 6/50...uhm, explore more concepts, and evolve your punches to actually take a shot at the person, if this was real...you'd fight like a girl -__-.....no hate
Aim to do well, thats not what you be mate
cos aimez so far off..he ended up with PSA
^meh 4/10
Aimez? you aint even hittin targets you wanker
but targets in your lungs, wanna die...you cancer
^just didn't really seem like it fit 2/10
my wordplay can be weak against you
cause my weak bars still own your best dude
^played 2/10
Shite punches and wordplay, now you cant flow too
id say its a shame, but the words even ashaimed to know you
^i laughed, but wording was a little eh 4/10
weak verse but my closer will hurt, youll have to fight me to stop
cause i just fuckin stormed you off....weather you like it or not
^nice word play, good ending 7/10
overall: 19/50...definately not your best, but it wasn't needed; your closer was enough, and ultimately, it looks like the only one you really tried on...nice battle, keep up to both, daubs has this easy
v/Daubs
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E-style
cause thats how e-style does it, we got power and skill
you vultures don't realize you feeding off our fuckin' kill
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