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damn pretty dope, um the down fall was your imagery, it wasn't horrible but it wasn't how great it usually is. I've seen better from you but this is pretty good the storyline is decent. vocabulary and flow was great but what most showed was your stucture and desire of emotion towards the topic, nicely done man. overall ima tell you that this is dope, very worthy of a rv spot.
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