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Old 12-28-05, 03:06 PM   #10
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat is pretty cool
intro isnt loud enough whos talking lol
voice is ok
1st guy is ok flow is cool lyrics wise wasnt feeling it his emotion and delivery is boring
i think you were better than the other dude youre def working with the lisp
i think your lisp sounds good on this track lol
lyrics were pretty cool doctor line was dope
liked the outro lol confusing : /
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