1)you sound about 6years old
2)beat is ill
3)quality is aight
4)your delivery sounds forced and unnatural
5)your flow is fine, gets a lil monotonous, change it up, try a different rhymescheme insted of lame ass rhymin only the end word ish..makes it boring, gd thing this is short
6)lyrics - nuttin new, cool 4 what it is i duppose
7)prsecence is there jus lacks cadence

meh, okay 4 RV, i would work out the knicks, change up the flow, record it more times to become mo natural wid it before i contemplated puttin this as the FIRST track sum1 wud here after buyin ma ish...

in the words of triple N: No h8, jus realness....

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