Daubs, hmm I see your starting Poetry, well your doing well. I don't like the concept. But your point of view towards the Topic is good, I liked your imaginary. it's very Complex. Ok the vibe i got from your poem was kinda abstract to me, a little blurr, but you went straight to the point towards the end. Cool keep it up and write more.

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