O_o, Alright. Kinda Basic to me the Concept. Your view towards the Topic is Basic, you need to be like your One eye looking at this picture and your other eye is looking at this picture, use 2 idea's and put them Together and see what you get, you'll prop get a Dope Creative Concept. Alright your scheme is eh. I want you write your poems as you talk, just try it and see what you get....Overall Ok poem keep it up and elevate.

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
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