Voted For: talon

big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds
Pretty cool
talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger
get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer
Not bad concept, weak wording, ok line
this may just be a key, but my words open doors
he's still in the closet....locked away in his drawers
Nah
smack this fool with capitols, knocking him backwards, take a peek
just look at NM, his progression only leads him to an L, see?
Nah
i laugh at his gay name, and doesn't make sense, i might add
well, if notorious is as whack as his rep, then yeh, the dude is bad
Nah

I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds...
Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red...
Nah, too simple
While i'm takin' shots at ya head, you just sittin' there jerkin' off...
This battle was over before it started, I'm the one u see merkin' slobs...
No
Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson...
My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'...
Poor concept
Your raps are weak, no flow, Mine keep comin', there instantanious...
There ain't no denying it, your a lil' punk bitch, your raps are heinous...
Nah
Your Gettin' fucked like an anus, Homie that ain't the way you get layed...
You Like a Fucken Gameboy G, The way ur fucken ass get played...
Really played concept

talon got this pretty easily, his opening two bars were decent.

v/ Talon

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