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Old 12-29-05, 01:08 AM   #10
Shazz
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Voted For: Mimesis

allik war-
Um... Don't know what was up with that last paragraph saying all this stuff but... Your verse looked a little like poetry to me.. not many tuff punches some personals and looked like you tryed to force the flow in there, didn't make too much sense , and you kept saying like "yo you couldn't even" blah blah not to interested.Structure was terrible.... Scratch it



Mimesis-
Man youve won too many battles... Good structure personals was good flow was aight, and you came up with I'll also take that brick wall.. and smash your fucking face through it
^rofl.. Nice verse , alot of potential but you missed one thing in your verse... "STFU



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