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Odi et Amo
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I liked your concept better, I felt it had more creativity to it as well. But I think you didn't use all the potential it had, it seems as if you kinda rushed it as well. I've seen better from you, I know you can do much better with a storyline like this. Though it was nice nonetheless, had good imagery, good emotion and everything was on point. I just feel you could've done a whole lot better you know
Vote for §ÄþþØ because her storyline intrigued me more
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Still agree with what I said in your battle thread, I felt you could've made this a better piece if you put more raw, strong emotion in. Just rewrote some lines, changed some things around, all those little things add up. It had a lot of potential nonetheless, maybe rewrite some things and show me. I know you can use this potential to the fullest girl, show me that raw talent 
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