I really liked this poem...I feel the little introduction could be worded a little better here and there, fix some grammatical errors, use better punctuations and such. I loved the image of the rosebush and the wine and the water. I feel you used good wordings to express all of that, the storyline progressed nicely. Some suggestions: get that cadence, those similar sounds imbedded in your poem, get more into detail here and there.

But nice poem

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