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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
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iI CAN'R VOTE BUT I'LL LEAVE SOME FEEDBACK FOR Y'ALL.
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
^^IGHT,A ITTLE BASIC THO
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
^^dopE,SHIT WAS CRACK DUN
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
^IGHT
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
^^EHH,OK..IZ IGHT NIGGA
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
^^NAH,PLAYED
4 IGHT LINES.
OVERALL=DECENT VERSE DUN.
Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
^^NAH,WACK
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
^^YOU BIT THAT VAMPIRE LINE.I KNOW IT.I CAN'T REMEMBER WHERE,BUT I KNOW YOU BIT IT.
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
^^PLAYED THE FUCK OUT!!!!
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
^^IGHT,NOT FEELIN THAT FURBY SHIT.YOU DON'T BRING THAT GAY ASS SHIT INTO BATTLE RAPS.KEEP IT HOOD.NAHMEAN?
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
^^FORCED LIKE A MUTHA FUKER.WHAT THE FUK IZ ALL A BORED?WOULD YA GO TO SOME NIGGA AND SAY,YOU KEEP ME ALL-A-BORED?FORCED SHIT!!
PURE WACKESS PON YOUR PART.
THE KILLA WON THIS BITCH EASY.
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