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Old 12-29-05, 05:58 PM   #5
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shud def. be talkin durin that intro


1st cat...quality is decent...cud hear his HISS

flow is not bad

vocals could be amped some


flow gets choppy after a while

lyrics don't seem all that good


2nd cat...flow seems off beat to me

vocals could be amped

OH WAIT...that was the hook...wel, the hook is offbeat, IMO



Para...like ur voice...vocals need better editing...maybe dub ur verse

flow isn't bad there...not at all


decent track

needs polish tho
RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218358

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