First thing I noticed your vocals were a little to low, and it was hard to understand what you were sayin. but I could hear you good enough to notice that your flow and delivery was good, pronounciation was decent but it's hard to hear you turn it up. for the other cat I also thought his vocals were too low, but I like his voice and his flow and delivery were good as well.

overall decent track just turn them vocals up.

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