ROLMFAO!!!ah'ight spul...I was the one who turned u on to Rakim an then u gon remix this classic....quality is decent.....flow is good but repetitive....delivery was almost on point it lacked energy..laid back was perfect for beat if only u had subtlely animated ya voice more....pronounciation went backwards tho..u had been spitting wit fully pronounced words lately but on this one u had a couple "wgfpggqwf" lines...that had me like huh?....addlibs shoulda been more energetic....stuffy nose line was played to shit but it shows u starting to grasps metas better...calam...the way u opened was real shaky in first 4 bars...then u settled into the beat....flow was koo but not spectacular following first 4 an feel of in a few spots, seemed u was going for a lil bit of a offsnare flow but u didn't follow rhythm of the beat....delivery was koo but didn't really mesh wit beat too well an vocals was tad loud....lyrically u had a bunch of eh punches....fundamentally sound but jus not great punches..jus common similies I've heard on countless mixtapes an forums....the lil sound effects an libs u did was tight tho....dun get me wrong not bad tho....overall this was a decent listen that could use sum touching up....

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