you lost me in your content...what suicide gets you"..?
this verse lacked justifications towards your title
didnt seem like you put alot of effort into it..
vocab was average...just try n hold a direction n keep
the readers interested ...try puns/wordplay/meta's
dont just write...THINK...
no hate man

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!