yo on some real sh** dawg listen, you need to sprinkle some fairy dust on the mic so ya lyrics could be fly... how old are you any ways??? i would say good for a youngsta but terrible if your older than kris kross back in the 90's... i aint sayin' that im the illest out there but homie you need some help...
delivery is not bad at all, i give you props on that fa sho...
but ramp up on vocab... i find myself lately picking up the dictionary and it heightened my lyrics by so many calibers... not saying all this to n.o.k.(knock) you down, well....

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