3 line in the hook doesnt make sense..
other then that its a good hook...
first verse focused to much on repetative singular ryhmes
in the 1st couple bars, then picked up a bit nearing the end..
not very thought provoking thou.. but still decently written.
second verse..atti..your vocab killed your verse.,
ya scheme was um...just not there in some bars...
i got the majority of your direction but it didnt always
connect well....
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hook was the best part of this...except for line 3

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!