k...listening...

1st cat.....he's coo....voice is ok....lyrics are ok...but i dunno...for some reason i wasnt really feelin it...i think it got too repetitive after the first few bars....maybe switch flow a lil more..and change delivery up some throughout the verse...


hook..i dont really like...its seems too robot like...just let it flow...it seems like u take breaths between every syllable in it...just let it come out smooth man....it has potential to be a catchy lil hook....

verse...yea u def. improving man...flow has gotten better...lyrics are coo...delivery and mic presence has also gotten better...it seems like u getting a lil more comfy behind the mic...u still gotta work on your flow, delivery, and presence some....but its coming man...keep working.....itll be a matter of time...

ok verse....all i can tell u is to keep working hard at it....

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