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Old 12-31-05, 12:49 AM   #8
Triple_N
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ok what was wit the laughing in beginning?......ok 1st dude quality need sum upping....opens decent delivery is somewhat forced....lyrics is jibberish from what I hear absolutely no point to them....flow was eh....decent.....hook....awwwwwww yall hurt track wit dat hook...I see what u was trying for but it aint work....2nd verse.....flow is choppy an mechinal sounding...too snare focused......lacks emotion...def need to improve rhythm of flow....an fluctuate vocal tone ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!more.......lyrically nothing spectacular but better than 1st......keep dropping an improving...no hate jus realness.
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