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Old 12-31-05, 12:21 PM   #12
King Solo
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Voted For: Natural killa

Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
this was good....a while back, now these types of punches are beyond used..
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
this was decent, a good personal..
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
the concept was good, but wording and delivery could be better..
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
this is like a statement, not really a diss..
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
used concept, ok delivery with it..

In all honesty, you can do better. A lot of the shit you used has been done before, by many others on RV and even by yourself. You had that nice personal with the shit about him losing to oreo, the rest was pretty weak, a few lines that were average and could've been dope with better wording. Not one of your better verses.
OVERALL: 5/10


Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
wordplay was forced, concept was played..
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
vampire concept was ok, but you worded it wack..
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
ok wordplay, punch was average..
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
again..basic wordplay with a weak punch, and at the furby shit, that was gay..
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
wordplay was nice, punch was ok, this was easily your best bar..

Yeah, you to...not your best. This was one of the weakest verses I've seen you put out. You win out with the wordplay in this battle, but really the rest of the categories go to NK. He had better punches than you, you had no real personals either. You had a few played bars, some real weak ones...especially that fucking Furby line, that was gay. The closer was really the only decent bar you had, you were just too inconsistent.
OVERALL: 4/10

V/ - Natural killa
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