*Scratches Head* This was a very criptic piece. I dont know man... I kind of didn't like this piece because it was just sooooooooo extremely interperative, yet, it never stayed consistant enough with the content to actually be ABLE to interperate the material. So, all I get from this is abstract poetics with no true, or defined direction. It just seemed that everytime I felt like I was beging to follow, the next stanza just completely through off the previous assumption. I dunno man, I like where it started to go but I really think you need to give it more direction and stay on topic more because this surpasses any for of comprehension... AKA, No one is going to understand this storyline. Stay up though... Each poem I see from you gets alittle better.