I wasnt feeling none of the verses, so I wont vote. I'll just up feedback. Tha creativity in both verses was there, but I think you guys were kinda pushing it to come out too much. I like how you wanted to come up with new lines, thats good and all, but they hafto make since at the same time. I think what both of ya'll did was focus too much on creative writing. Another thing I saw was soft disses. Dissing each other wasn't all that. I felt ya'll could've came a lil bit harder. Some of the lines should've been left out. Structure was easy to read in both verses. Usually I judge on delivery. Who delivered there verse better by staying more consistent, and I didn't see any of that. I think both of you have skill, you just rushed through these verses. Focus more on harder disses and better wordplay, and you probably will elevate more.

Good verses though.


-Take all critism and use it to better yourself.


-Eazy

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