Voted For: Dopium

DOPIUM takes wit better creativty, invovlement of the action, and for better wordplay wit the topic...........NUFF SAID


ALIK that type of topical style is a one way ticket to defeat........up ur topical homes....................




v/ DOPIUM
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A sense of anxiousness in every breath.
dreary visions as I watch my footsteps.-

walking beside me is a beautiful girl askin questions.
lost for words with no expressions and embarrassing impressions.-

Finally we enter the restraunt obliged tried telling jokes an I almost cried.
Couldn’t make up my mind to be embarrassed or to run and hide.

best lines.


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