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Old 01-01-06, 09:11 AM   #12
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Voted For: allik war

well Alikk Your Structure Was Aigght But Your Scheme Was Horrible No Flow Switches Or Nothing THe Acual Verse Was Whack As Well Lmao..I Dunno WHat To Say Im Stunned By The Whackness
Aigght Lemme Say

Nothing Vs

A sense of anxiousness in every breath.
dreary visions as I watch my footsteps.

Alik You been Owned,Dopium Your Emotion And Im agery Was Good Makes You Think Your In The Scene,Well I Liked This Peice Especially:
walking beside me is a beautiful girl askin questions.
lost for words with no expressions and embarrassing impressions.
hearts racing fast feels like a formula 1 race pulling tons.
She winks at me and laughs and her smiles as good as the sun.
Finally we enter the restraunt obliged tried telling jokes an I almost cried

Very Nice Verse

This Was Just A Easy Win For Dopium

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