Voted For: Mentalz

Tech...

yours was ight, it stuck to the topic on the surface but didnt get deeper and more elaborate. Your rhyming was inconsistant, sometimes on sylabble which is boring now but there were multis. Dint get deep so wasnt so much emotion, was aight though.

Mentalz...

Your structure stood out, didnt follow the bar by bar rhyming which was creative and had a good flow, this was deeper in the topic than techs, was feeling the concept you used, it had more consistant solid vocab and emotion imo.

V./ Mentalz

NO HATE, Gl to you both..

RTF please.

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