Voted For: Mentalz

mentalz takes it wit better imagery and wordplay wit the topic...............

So I walk as vibrant tally's rally expressionless... directionless
Until my recklessness is chaos converted to perfection, bliss
^^^nice opener.............


the closer was good too and the story flowed well.........TECG ur was good too homes...but i feel you lacked on parts that meant alot and was important.




V/ MENTALZ...RTF homes.

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