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Old 01-01-06, 04:43 PM   #35
Affliction
Flyweight
 
Posts: 136
This was feedback posted for D.Zaster

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He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career

vs
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations

V/ D.Z cause his Punches was good and hard hitting, with the wordplays. Ill T you had one bar of a good Punch, the other bars, I was just not feeling it because it was kinda played out, do some wordplays like D.Z did and I bet you'll get better bruh. One, O snap this is 200 Post..Sorry Don't have, I'll leave this as a feedback.