pain is weakness leaving the body
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umm..... iight flow and rhyme scheme, but absolutely no topic, more like a battle.... and even then the punches weren't on point..... the best part was the slave thing cuz it was the most consistant...... sort of a Cass jump-off, like that my interpretation.... if ur gonna get into that, u gotta make sure ur punches are hard or funny, and u gotta step up ur voc. and make sure u use words in the right context.... i remember u from TTI, stay up playa, ur gettin better.......
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
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