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Old 01-01-06, 07:10 PM   #10
Acuity
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beat aint 2 bad, first breh's quality could be better, his flow is aight, lyrics, not too sure what the point of them is if u feel me, hook is kinda meh, not diggin it and it sounds off somehow , like its not in time with th beat. 2nd MC is lyrically better, could up his quality too, flow is kinda shakey -on beat then off beat etc and soundin kinda forced n uncomfortable, delivery was decent. An aight track, just needs the quirks worked on and a some touchin up. 1
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