a few things... this was WAY to basic... I'm not sure when you started but... this is wow...


first try a few things... like... wordplay... punches... actually fuck that... start simple...



rhyme scheme... switch it up... use different styles...


not blah blah blah blah blah something
blah blah blah blah blah blah something



more like...


I'm runnin to fall... puntin the ball
stuntin n' all... ready to jump on my call...


see that says nothing what so ever... nor has any meaning... but is better than any couplet you have...


so start there... and good luck.