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Old 01-02-06, 12:00 PM   #12
Acuity
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yd u pan ur hook from left to right..LMAO @ ur voice, no offence but rap normally, cos dis is joke lmao..lyrically 1st verse is poor....beat is aight...inter sounds like hes rappin without his mouth fully open, maybe this delivery he goin 4..lyrically - punchlines are droppin...inter outshines on this...yall need better quality or better mixin, unf on 3rd verse you sound more comfortable, but ur voice jus dont suit this gangsta ish imo, i cnt take it seriously, u sound 6. no hate jus my opinion
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