yea volume way low G


first verse - flow on point most time.. lyrics are strait from what the song is about.. so you strait

i aint never been a dipset fan and definately not a camron fan.. but it was aight

second verse - strait for the most part.. really hard to hear ya lyrics tho son.. my speakers only go so loud heehee..

id say you just need to work on when writing ya lyrics.. havin a more creative way of sayin somethin or if not even that, make it really fun to listen to you rhyme.. like make people be like "i like the way he put that, even tho that dont really rhyme its tight? you know ? deliver it to em.. just work on that and you'll be on a pretty good start.. ya flow has some crativeness to it so thats a plus..

ok drop tho son..

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