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why are you whispering on the mic?
ur flow is on beat...but ur delivery is mumbly
why are the sound levels so low?
the 2nd cat after the hook has a nice flow
interesting voice
hook...I like the delivery of it...but, there was nothing memorable about it
hooks, IMO, should be repetitive, almost chant-like to be catchy
3rd verse...choppy flow...even though it's on beat for the most part
decent drop
fix ur levels
RTF please in my Been a long time track
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